This is a small piece of pure spontaneity. There’s no rhyme, no alliteration. It’s just a couple of verses that came out when I was chilling at the balcony, watching the rain. Things like this resonate with me more than the poems with rhymes and refrains. What about you?

It’s raining outside. In phases.
Fast? Slow? It’s a rhythm I can’t tap to.
It smells nice. Like gentle familiar novelty.
Smell with my eyes. I smell colour.
Like colour on a fresh painting.
It’s preaching into the air.
It sounds like love.
If there is silence in between, that’s all I feel.
My arms are feeling the drops that I only see.
I’m under construction, a puzzle.
Oh, Lord, your creation is in awe of itself.
Hope you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for reading and have a blast just existing!
Love it ππ
Beautiful write
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Thank you! Appreciate it.
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My pleasure πΈβ£οΈ
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I loved it too, just how God works through nature it has a purity to it a feeling of being loved.
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So true! Thank you so much for sharing.π
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A beautiful last line ! Let us have a blast just existing. π€
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Thank you. I put that at the end of every post. I try to live by it.π
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βLike colour on a fresh painting.
Itβs preaching into the air.
It sounds like love….β
Stefan, your poem also has a rhythm to it I canβt tap to, yet refreshes! Thank u! π
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Thank you so much, Felipe! That’s beautiful compliment.
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Beautiful is the word
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Yes!!
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Beautiful π
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Thank you!!
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My pleasure! Nice to meet you π€
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You too!
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That’s an awesome poem! Screams originality from every nook. Especially loved “Iβm under construction, a puzzle.” Great job!!
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Thank you!!! ππ€
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My pleasure! ππ
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